Review writing of the short story...
My point of this story is that Dart is a greedy boy. Greed of the property was given by an old man. Maybe he was in shock over the fate of her family who suddenly becomes easier than ever. Dart does not violate any of the conditions but he was too obsessed with what he was facing. He should not be so. He should thrift with pleasure that he could in no way make any demand by much. He is also supposed to make a request for the important things.
Pretend that I am director...
If I was the director for this story of course I will make the story more interesting. Of course I will make my main character a person be careful if given the facility to life. Not too over. Some people can not control the desire to be happy in life, respectively. Should be well controlled. For character Damak, of course feel very sorry for her plight but he should be more careful with the ring he could from the old one by not asking too many things that are not important.
What kind of ending I would like to have...
I would like to end this story with a Damak's family like other families. Not too poor and not too fancy. If they are too poor and despised and condemned if too rich also will make other people envious of Damak's family wealth earn.
