Review writing of the short story...
For my opinion about this story, Basran is a very nice and a hard working man. Basran is also an honest and good-hearted man. Example here, when an old lady came to ask for some fruits from Basran, he didn't ask for little money from the old lady. He gives with sincerity. The old lady gave him some seeds to gain a more lucrative. Basran also not one to be easily influenced by others, including his own wife. The next day, he has earned the gold tree from seed yield given by an old lady yesterday. That an old lady had given orders to basran not to cite the red leaves. Basran did not pluck the red leaves even his wife had a wrong impression of the red leaves has been cited a lot of that leaves. In the evening, Basran come back to the farm and saw that tree was hidden. This quick attitude this misconception is not good to be emulated.
Pretend that I am director...
If I was the director for this story, I suggest that this story could provide more lessons for all readers. For example, Nasir Bilal Khan can hold a character as Basran as in drama or film who is played by him mostly consist of good character, honesty, trust and sincerity. Honorable behavior should be emulated. In my opinion, the character may be held by Basran's wife with Shiela Rusli. This is also because the characters are always taken by her in any film or drama mostly bad character to be emulated.
What kind of ending I would like to have...
The ending to this story is that I want Basran may be able to advise his wife to be more generous towards others. In addition, if Basran's wife not be negative like in the story, most likely will increase Basrans family fun with the help of an old lady. To cozy up to the story, would not it be great if this story ends with happiness? It would be so much fun!
